some criticism
great song, but towards the beginning, the bass is really overpowering,
i don't know if this was intended, but whatver.
i liked the sound and style of this a lot.
some criticism
great song, but towards the beginning, the bass is really overpowering,
i don't know if this was intended, but whatver.
i liked the sound and style of this a lot.
Hey man, thanks for the review. Yeah the bass is meant to be particularly powerful but not really 'over'-powering. I'm using some very basic equipment so mastering is pretty difficult.
Anyway thanks for the review. Always nice to receive some very generous criticism.
28 votes
and 2 reviews.
not a huge fan of the newgrounds people, but
w/e
its a good song, peresonally ive never heard it,
but it sounds good nonetheless.
but i never give 5s on remakes, so a 4 for you.
I absolutely agree. No one should get a 5 for a remake unless it makes the ears shudder with delight...and this song doesn't quite approach that level of greatness lol.
And i know man, Nobody leaves a frickin review anymore. They just vote and go on their way without so much as a reason to why they would vote something a 1 or a 2...kinda frustrating.
Thanks for the review :)
hallo
hallo, hoe is mijn Nederlands? ik hoop dat de boodschap is duidelijk. dit is een goed nummer, muzikaal (kunnen gebruiken minder bass drum in delen), maar u moet een beter muziek programma. welk programma gebruikt u?
tell me if the gramar is bad, so i can correct myself.
haha, its just plain old Dutch ^^ nothing really wrong :P Where 're you from? :P
But oke... the song. I use Reason 4, the only one i seem to like... Tried Cubase but I hate it... and FL8 is.... I dont know... I need some help with understanding that I think... All I do with Reason 4 is what I found out by muself... So lot of improvement can be made. Still finding out new things... I don't think its the program, but its my failure to work with it... I need to tweak the samples better and finetune and master my songs better... But its rather hard to find it all out by myself ^^ So the only thing I can do is keep on trying and trying... Which is what i'm doing with my songs ^^ Thanks for listening and reviewing!
really
might need to change the drums at least.
the drums sound a little too robotic.
as the overall song, i liked thye beginning, but as the song progressed is sounded kinda cheesy, no offense.
Thanks for listening ^^ Indeed... I might need to change the song so its more in the style of the beginning/intro... Although I kinda like the organ :P I'll see what I can do!
purty gewd
even in my headphones, the guitar makes this clippy sound.
perhaps you shouldn't distort it so much.
what recording software do you use?
If you mean the popping sounds, that's my shitty interface. It makes that weird noise for no good reason:@.
it's a little too abstract for my taste
but kudos for effort and good eq/mastering (well, its ok).
^____^y thank you much!! I appriciate the feedback!
lol
good song, the guy beneath me is dumb. buti liked how you saud "fuckin" once then starred it out the rest of the time but yeah, the assline is alittle too repetitive, the chorus shouldnt be just adding a trumpet sound.
still a good song at parts, though. 4/5 8/10
haha, yeah, mistakes are always made when angry! :P Thanks for review and score!
Roc A Lot / TVB
great song
a little repetitive, but nonetheless,
great eq and composure.
overall, good song.
Thank you Very Much!
doubt youll actualy do it, but
its a great chord progression, maybe you should try adding to it,
a nice lead, some drums and a bassline and this would be a 5/9-10 instead of a 4/8
great idea, but your right. ;)
overall gewd
sounded quite professional.
although(i guess it would interfere with the mood of the song, but) the chord progression and bass could been a little brighter, or have a teency bit more pronunciation,=, if thats even the right word.
other thatn that, fantastic.
but i think you could stand (and this is from hearing all your music) to go outside the box a little.
If by brighter you mean 'happier,' I completely disagree, as yeah, it would interfere with the mood which is something i was going for in this song (a chill, emotional-type mood, not to mention wintery ;D).
As far as going outside the box, not sure what you mean by that either, I can't hear many consistencies in my music. :x
Wonderful review, thanks!
eris
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