kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Revisit Me, Please (dj JPA)]

derp

i dunno why, but i caught some distortion,
but it kept a mood, and kudos for that,
and it wasn't boring, so good jorb.
but watch the reverb, sometimes it can start clogging up the sound if there are too many voices.
other than that, good :D

[TAWQ - Turbine (WIP)]

22 sec

that's not enough to even be a WIP, but i like the like the little thing you got going,
but the reese has some loud spots, put a compressor or a limiter on that bee-yotch.
still, i give credit where credit's due.

BlackVen0m responds:

I know, it seems a bit short but it is actually quite hard adding onto this short tune... x.x
I try many different synths, basses and other percussions to keep the flow going to extend it but it just seems that this bass is a very difficult one.

[[Dj-A] We Await]

so.

the title was a sentence fragment, consider revising.
once the song got about haflway done, when the real trance kicked in, it felt like nothing happened, there wasn't enough energy in the 2nd half to make up for the first, but i like how it sounds.
i gueess you didn't put a ton of energy into it, but i'm juss sayin'
still, it was above par

weemeee responds:

This was done in less than an hour lol

[Enya DnB remix]

lol

dude, that's an old song, but i think a lot of people can recognize it.
anyhow, this sounded more like hip hop, because the beat never really got huge, and there was a very faint (but it was nice) bassline.
but still, it's pretty good, hard to mess a classic like that up.
i liked the prescence of the drums,
good jorb, for 2 years old.

Sblounchked responds:

yeah im going to fix it all up tomorrow. i just decided to upload it after so long and after i realized it was all choppy. its 3 in the morning here so im not really in the mood to fix it but check out the fixed version when i upload it

[Dire Dire Docks -MoriMix-]

there's actually a good bassline in the original

sounds like you were going for that flowing sound, but it still needs some sort of bassline, not just the chordal low notes.
just give it a higher attack, and cut the higher frequencies out.
but the bassline has a simple 1-5-9 progression on each chord, so you can just sound it out.
but i liked what was there,
so yeah!

Morien18 responds:

As far as musical talent goes, I can read sheet music, and apparently make certain remakes and whatnot. When I can't make a song by ear, no matter how hard I try, I resort to sheet music, and go by it to a definite point. Of course, here and there I make a few changes... :P When I used the sheet music, they did not include the "Bassline" as you call it. plus it sounds just fine to me. :P kinda gives the peaceful feel or something... but yeah, the reviewers call the shots, not me. So i'm gonna eat some chicken... or children... always get those two confused...

[HEADSHOTS]

well

i kinda like your songwriting, as far as chords go,
but try and learn your music software, so you get the most out of you songs,
for a more professional sound.

[To Telephin]

well

i'm not saying the composition is bad,
it's actually really good
but the mastering leaves something to be desired.
the bass is well done, but the guitar needs to be cleaned up a little,
and the vocal track needs to be quieted (on some parts) and blended into the song, not just layed on there.
and i would advise adding an echo effect to the vocal track, ti would sound sweet.
also, the drums need to be EQ'd, at some times i can't hear it, and other's i can't hear anything but it.
but still, i like what's going on here, just needs some cleaning up.

[Stargazer [Demo]]

i agree

with michell.
that kick just isn't good for the song,
i like were youre going with it,
having a kick that's not just "uhn" all the time
but find a better one to suit.
try using fruity kick, and add fruity squeeze (if you're using flstudio)
if not, add a lo-fi effect to the kick and see how that sounds.
other than that,
i think the 1:17 part was kinda sloppy, master that better or scrap it,
but when it comes to 1:36, i liked that, very glitchy.

[[SxE] A Real Problem]

yes

drums unecessary,
but the message was beautiful.

ArisingFlame responds:

Drums fun. :D (Drunk)
Message, heartfelt.

[Couldn't Help Myself [ME3]]

wow

really great timing and rhythms.
definently DnB.
quite wild,
but could use a teeny bit of touching up.
nothing huge, tho ;]