kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ILTG]

yeah

so i listened to this and what i heard was a little unrefined.
i think if you spent more time EQ'ing and MAKING your instruments and drumloops, then the product will be that much better.
i'm not saying it's bad, i'm saying it's unpolished.

Genshiken responds:

Ok thanks. I'm still Kind of a nub when it comes to Fruity Loops, but I appreciate the criticism and I'll try to polish my songs some more. :)

[Journey To Paradise (EP2 Demo)]

i'm sure

it'll turn out great :D
could you take a look at some of my songs?
you seem lik the kind of person who knows a little about what they're doing, lol.

DigitalPulse responds:

Yeah man, I'll take a look.

Thanks for the review,

Digital Pulse

[AJ: Hello Mrs. Kennedy]

it would sound nice

if you wah-wah'd the keyboard as the song progressed, and tightened the drums (like decompressed the upper frequencies a little). but the song was real nice, great rhythm.

[FYRG 2 (Never Finished)]

hmm

the guitar was a bit "tubey", maybe you could pull back that effct, and the song lacks depth, louden the bass (bass drum and bassline), and try to find more authentic instruments/generators (if you can help it)

[Positive >Cyclonic< [WiP]]

the synth in the beginning

way too zing-y for my taste, compress it a bit, and work in some subtle sidechaining, also in general, EQ more so that no instrument is WAY too loud. but it was preety gewd, a diamond in the rough, one might say.

[NoImg (EP2 Demo)]

wow, whit

great job on this one, great sidechaining and the bass is perfect.
you really are one of the best EQ'ers on this site.

[Bees R Scary]

jhonen vasquez?

i assume you know who the guy is, lol.
well your songs are weird, but theyre not that bad, really, just needs a bit of fine-tuning.

alienfetus responds:

Doom doom doom.

[Trapped In Hell]

weird

i dunno what to think of it.

[Veritas- Heavens Tease]

not too bad

not a big fan of trance, due to the generic-ness of it (usually), but this song was a nice thing, but it's really repetitive. i guess its progressive trance, but... eh, whatever.
on a technical standpoint, ya did good, julessmokespot.
oh and bass drum could use a little bass-y.. discharge, like when the bass drum hits a little bass (sound, like a saw/sine or something) could play softly to make the bass drum hit harder.

[Surreal-Schizm]

lol

sounds like a soft-core porn song.
don't take offense, but yeah the EQing was pretty well done, and the drums were reallly quiet, so boost them a bit, but yeah, great quality, and a pretty good song.