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[Exotec - This Winter (Demo)]

mmyep

you sound like you know what you're doing, so i'll just offer my opinion.
the piano in the beginning (the left-hand part) sounds too cloudy for my taste, if you haven't already, split the left-hand and right-hand piano into 2 tracks and EQ each so the bass doesn't sound so blotchy..? everything else sounded pretty nice. the drums were kinda flat (try changing the pitch of the snare/hi-hat/bass every now and again) the lead that comes in around 3:00 is really loud for its frequency (just my opnion, but, well, look at your score)
but overally, sounded really nice, even though the chord progression got a little boring to me (you can only lead-solo a certain amount, imo)

Exotec responds:

thank you for your review :) i literally put this together in half an hour, so it's not up to my standards either. The final mix with vocals will be out soon.

[The Wings That Fly Us]

well

the reverb sounds nice, but try not to use the overused saw and trance cut.
it's ok, i mean the saw is a little loud and the instruments are kinda MIDI, but it's just ok for me.
i'll vote 5 because some retard is 0-bombing everyone's submissions.

steven-lee responds:

thanks for the review. i'll keep that in mind. plus this song was pretty rushed anyway lol. just a reeverb test in my opinion

[Chezbeats WIP]

sounds great

i do believe an 0-bomber is on the loose.
he's downvoting everyone's submissions.
but yeah, this (for a loop) sounds nice.
it flows really well and the timbres are very well assembled.

[Scorched Peaks DnB (WIP)]

hey good jorb

there's drum, AND bass!
listen to zolzer on this one, i reery hope you understand what he was talking about, but i say
widen your bass out and pick the kick up on the higher freq's (try fruit kick if you use FL9, it's the shizzy)

SteakJohnson responds:

thanksa bunch! yourr songs r good too

[Not important]

fuck the general population

i dunno, it's repetitive and completely random, but i likes ot for some weird reason.
prolly coz it sounds like one of my songs, lol (it's called _never_after, if you wanna listen). but i voted 5.
go you.

[Get Naked. Right Now. [8bit]]

just

if this was in a game 30 yers ago, you'd be getting 5's.
really, it doesn't sound that bad, in fact, i say it's pretty ok.
people on NG seem to follow the trend of "if the guy before me voted 0, i gotsta vote 0"
but yeah, i voted 5 to even things out and because you deserve it.
nowmake it.. not 8-bit.

Lowash responds:

Thanks alot. I'm planning on working on that... and yeah it sucks the songs on this site get voted down so frequently just because.

[Lackadaisical Cohort - Part 2]

it sure is miscellaneous

like the vox pad (reminds me of Daft Punk, but whatever) the bass in the beginning, i can tell you wanted distortion and clipping and whatnot, but there's a LOT of clipping, it's a little excessive, but hey, it's just my opinion.
and because it's an 11 minute song, there's a lot of randomness (nothing wrong with it, just wanted to point it out)
really like the drums, EQ is great, i think the snare/clap/whatever could be louder or maybe a higher frequency, but srs, this is just my opnion.
really, this song is put together very well and on a technical standpoint it's
super-duper.
i can't make criticizations, but i can offer my opinion, so thar ye goest.

InvisibleObserver responds:

I think some of the clipping sounds are intentional, but there is some coming through that was not present in the 320kbps version. I'll likely dip the volume a bit, re-render and upload. My musics very subjective as I'm glad you appear to be aware of.

Thanks for the review and maintaining intelligence.

[The Anthem of Rebirth -WIP-]

blech, garageband

but it sounds nice (at least the intro), the drums are too loud, and the noise that happens every 8 beats should be pulled back a little.
the strings are really MIDI, so make them a bit quieter.
i dunno what i can say about the compusure, seeing as it was garageband, and so you jsut mixed and matched the chords and patterns, but with some EQ work, this could be O.K.
also, there is some dissonance at points when the strings are playing (extremely loud, btw), so see if you can do anything about that.
i vote 5 on everything unless it's utter crap, and so you get your 5.
but really:
2/5
4/10

[Castle Rave]

aww

didn't get the song :((
i voted 5 anyways :)

AdventureBiscuit responds:

cheers!

What do you mean, you didn't get the song?

thanks for the 5 though! :3

[Scout's Tiny Head]

lol

really liked the song.
stuttering is so annoying.
just watch the volume on those beepy sounds.
great jorb.