kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Xenosphere demo]

sounds good

sounds good, i'm not looking too deep into it, but it sounds pretty ok, no gaping flaws.

[Now I'm trying Hip-Hop.]

i dunno

it's a loop and all, but its just really MIDI sounding.
but i'm sure you didn't spend a month making this, so whatever.
i vote 5 on everything, so enjoy it.

7901 responds:

MIDI, hmm? Yeah, I spent about 10 minutes on it.

[Hard Session]

don't know alot about this style of music

but there was a lot of clipping and its overbass'd (but i have a hunch that it was intended) but do EQ it better so the bass doesn't cloud up and distort.

modder200 responds:

yes it was intended but someimes i feel too like it is too much XD. i think i'll adjust it later

[Stealth Core WIP - TopGull]

choose better

synths.
drums weren't half bad, but the synths are loud and very MIDI sounding,
maybe filter it a little so it wah-wahs synchroniously with the song,
but that's just an idea.

[Give You Everything [7000]]

this is pretty crazy

really nice flow, i like it a lot.
perhaps when the wah-wah comes on you could lessen the effect so that the vocals are less filtered and easier to hear.
but other than that, is a great tune,
really enjoyed it.

[I Won't Dream]

always enjoy live

wokrs on NG,
ok, heres some tips.
invest some money in a guitar to USB cord, it will really improve the guitar quality (and theyre cheap)
record guitar and voice seperately (dunno if you did, but its a good tip)
when you sing dont breath into the mic, it distorts, sing above the mic, not into it.
the song sounds good, you just need to edit it a bit to make it sound that much more professional.
and use a metronome if youre timing is off (if you dont want it to get in the recording, use a metronome in earphones.)

toastedavalanche responds:

Cheers for the mic and the USB chord advice. I'm still practicing with a metronome (I stupidly left it till really late) so as soon as I'm good enough the tunes will improve. Glad you liked it.

[Adventurous Caves (The Tunnel)]

dude.

there's some stuff wrong with your song,
1. EQ (its out of wack)
2. the instruments (very MIDI)
those are the 2 biggest ones you should worry about right now.
listen to some pros and listen to how they sort instruments.
the song is too crowded.
look, i dont mean to come off as a dick, but the song needs serious re-doing.

MoNkEyBoY1993 responds:

lol, thanks, alot, man.

I'm not a pro, myself; i just do this for fun as a lil' hobby of sorts.

thanks a bunch for the feedback. :)

[MH16: Maybe Tomorrow]

zolzer

is a smart guy, read it.
and the reverb clouds up at points, pull it back,
the cymbals need more twang and need to be a WEE bit louder.
and some tracks (piano, mostly) need to be quiter.
spend a god amount of time EQ'ing and your song will sound a LOT more professional.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for all the advices! The only point that i don't agree with you on is that the piano needs to be more quiet, but i'll look into that too ;-)
I really appreciate your review! :D

[Enemys]

lol

its "enemies"
but its a good song nonetheless,
a little cheesy, and its kind of low quality (just use a better exporter or something)
but it works, good job.
i voted 5.

veteranpie responds:

Meh. i didn't put much into this one though.