some criticism
great song, but towards the beginning, the bass is really overpowering,
i don't know if this was intended, but whatver.
i liked the sound and style of this a lot.
some criticism
great song, but towards the beginning, the bass is really overpowering,
i don't know if this was intended, but whatver.
i liked the sound and style of this a lot.
Hey man, thanks for the review. Yeah the bass is meant to be particularly powerful but not really 'over'-powering. I'm using some very basic equipment so mastering is pretty difficult.
Anyway thanks for the review. Always nice to receive some very generous criticism.
28 votes
and 2 reviews.
not a huge fan of the newgrounds people, but
w/e
its a good song, peresonally ive never heard it,
but it sounds good nonetheless.
but i never give 5s on remakes, so a 4 for you.
I absolutely agree. No one should get a 5 for a remake unless it makes the ears shudder with delight...and this song doesn't quite approach that level of greatness lol.
And i know man, Nobody leaves a frickin review anymore. They just vote and go on their way without so much as a reason to why they would vote something a 1 or a 2...kinda frustrating.
Thanks for the review :)
SUGGESTION REVIEW
it's a good song and all, but it needs some depth, try adding chords (not just arps). make them soft so they blend in. also the drums are pretty nice, but the bass drum needs a little treble to help it stick out. but other than that, with a little moreEQ and mastering work, this could be a 5 instead of a 4 for me.
creative
extra glitchy, mang
and you pulled it off.
only thing ive been able to pull off
is my pecker.
anyways, i know it's DnB,
but the best songs have a higher pitched "hook" sound
and this could use one.
but it's great as is as a vg song.
for a whole song
it's meh.
but for an intro, it's pretty kickass.
everything works pretty well,
has a sort of simplistic feel for me.
and the snare could do with some light reverb.
bass is a little loud
well it IS DnB, but it has a little too much treble, so its pretty distracting.
also, add some ambient noises other than the regular fadey chords, a low grumbly would help pull the quieter parts through.
purty good
lol dont get too attached to a girl,
it tends to creep them out. and you dont want to end up with a case of the onies.
about the song, its a good base, but needs a little extra.
although i dont think youre going to work on this any more.
hallo
hallo, hoe is mijn Nederlands? ik hoop dat de boodschap is duidelijk. dit is een goed nummer, muzikaal (kunnen gebruiken minder bass drum in delen), maar u moet een beter muziek programma. welk programma gebruikt u?
tell me if the gramar is bad, so i can correct myself.
haha, its just plain old Dutch ^^ nothing really wrong :P Where 're you from? :P
But oke... the song. I use Reason 4, the only one i seem to like... Tried Cubase but I hate it... and FL8 is.... I dont know... I need some help with understanding that I think... All I do with Reason 4 is what I found out by muself... So lot of improvement can be made. Still finding out new things... I don't think its the program, but its my failure to work with it... I need to tweak the samples better and finetune and master my songs better... But its rather hard to find it all out by myself ^^ So the only thing I can do is keep on trying and trying... Which is what i'm doing with my songs ^^ Thanks for listening and reviewing!
really
might need to change the drums at least.
the drums sound a little too robotic.
as the overall song, i liked thye beginning, but as the song progressed is sounded kinda cheesy, no offense.
Thanks for listening ^^ Indeed... I might need to change the song so its more in the style of the beginning/intro... Although I kinda like the organ :P I'll see what I can do!
as long as your doing renditions...
do some Earthboud/Moher songs.
they're the best, i swaer.
polyanna, theme of love, or porky's pokies, if i had a choice.
eris
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