kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Enteroar - Saturation V2]

wootz

i like the chord progression, although it's only 4 measures oho

Enteroar responds:

oho

[Freezing - Enteroar]

everyone's an expert

here on newgrounds :p

you should try and make a funky bassline for a song, your bass tracks would really work well as funk imho.

the title doesn't really fit, but it's not that important..

the piano is a little cliche, maybe you could snazz it up a little somehow.

i think it'd sound neat if you put a reverb effect over the entire song, and automated it to kick in around :42 (cut it off when you're doing solos & duets).
don't set the effect too high, and make the length inder 1.5 sec, and it'll fill the song up well.
if it doesn't work, then whatevs, because it's not too hard to do..

now that i read the author's comments, i feel sort of like an idiot :p

wellp, keep on truckin' brokaline.

Enteroar responds:

indeed, they are.
mmk thanks :@ i like funkkkk :D
i know it doesnt :/
i know, but i like cheesy trance ):

thanks sir.
~Enteroar

[Enteroar - Ghosts]

i like the the little chord progression

it's very deep...
i would change the clap,
and i like that different pacing!
maybe you could put a reverb on the clap sidechained to the bass or something..
but that's just my opinion..
break's sounding neat..
maybe in the break, you could have a filtered beat that comes in, instead of the instant transition to a kick..
i think it would sound good,
but you don't have to.
and compress the hi-hats to something low, and have the attack a little up, so you get a crisper one.
but that could ruin it, but try for me baby?

overall it's a great and innovative sound as far as my techno knowledge goes.

Enteroar responds:

ooo i like this advice. i can totally hear what youre talking about.
ill try LOL ;D
tyty.

[A Frigost Experience]

hmm

don't worry, i helped a playa out with his scores..

well the song isn't boring,i liked how instruments changed.
but i might suggest focusing on the drum's rhythmic patterns a little more, and putting a compressor and an EQ on every instrument, so you don't have a clogged up sound.

also, there's a lack of high pitched sounds, you don't have to add a ton, just to balance the sound out a little.

still, i liked what was there, and i feel NG needs to step up on the commenting!
it's like they only want to comment on submissions that already have thousands of them!

well, i wish you luck and perseverance, good sir.

RawGreen responds:

wow, alright, well thanks ._.

[Enteroar - Clouds]

neat-o

i like the tune, it sounds like a progression you can really play around with.
well, imo, i like a higher snare,
but still liked the variation in the drum track.
say put a compressor on every track, it helps with mastering a ton!
that's about all it,
have a sweet life, keep making music and getting better!

Enteroar responds:

thank you sir :D

[Till' The Build Up]

neat-o

sweet to see you're making some more songs.
instead of making your lead sound louder, try copying it into another channel and panning one channel hard left and the other hard right,
then turn them down a little to match the song!
and changing the pitch and velocity a teeeny tiny bit on your drum instruments gives a more natural feel (since people don't make the same noise everytime they hit a drum head) and put emphasis on certain beats for more rhythm.
it took me some time to figure those out, i wish someone would have just told me.
as for the song, i like the feel, the chords fit well together.
sounds good, maannnnn

Ef-X responds:

Man...thank you so much for this review, I'll work on it as soon as I can.

[Unsure (Theme)]

wow, lol

funny how our songs have the same name, and yet such a different feel.
anyhow, very "epic" as the kiddos say.
personally, i think the transition at 2:19 was abrupt.
if it's your program, and yu can't get around it, i suggest skipping the boom and having short (but moty pizzi) strings playing quarters and slowly adding delay or reverb until you can just have them play what you wanted them to play originally.
and i think the attack on the strings is too much imo, shorten it a tad.
but, all opinion.

SSJDre responds:

There are sill a few things I haven't learned how to do with my program, but I'm learning it as I go. I probably could have slid the mix a little to stop that hard transition, but I didn't think about it at the time. But, Unsure and Unattached aren't the same name, though I get what you mean by the words themselves having similar meanings. When I put this track together, I was worried that I made a bad track, but from all of the downloads and the listens as well as the votes, I'm guessing I did a good job, otherwise you probably would have scored me at a 4 or something. Thanks for the review, I'll keep that in mind with my next submission.

[Drowning Dream ]D.M.[]

you've gotten clubby

so you've become a dj legit, good job, broham!
song is pretty cool, the pizzi part is a little out of it for me, but the writing was
good stuff.

Darren-M responds:

thanks! im glad the structure wasnt too eccentric for you lol, yeah its fun to play my music for others

[Deathscape]

methinks

it's pretty atmospheric, it gives the mood of the title very well.
if it were to be used in some game,i'd guess that they'd hollow it out and make it sound REALLY distant.
but i like where it is.
good stuff.

BatesyBates responds:

Cheers mate!

[DKC - No Fear]

hmm

well it's awwright with me.
but it lacks flair, you know?
i dunno, i'm not really into trance and the like,
so what do i know?
still, not bad.

cRAVE01 responds:

thank you : )