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[{MSX} Artificial Awakening]

go you

sounds nice.
up the lower frequency on the bass, so it doesn't have to be so loud and controlling (i know its drumb and bass, but still).
but yeah, other than that, it's a little repetetive chord-wise,
but sounds great, enjoy your 5.

MSXOmega responds:

Ok, I'll try that. Thanks for the 5!

[(--Glitch--)]

good job

sounds cool, now add a bassline to deepen the song (the one that's there is so quiet, in non-existant).
liked the timing and the drums and synths and composure and all,
it just needs a bassline.

mr-match responds:

Working on it. Thanks for the suggestion.

[BlackVenom - DustStorm WIP]

ok, so

the sitar/guitar in the beginning, EQ it, so it's not so high on the frequency,
i like the song as a whole, and it's got great use of timbre.
sounds a little like pendulum, but i digress,
enjoyed the tune, and if i had my way, i would add short, beepy chords when the bass hits at 1:25 to fill the song out a little more.

BlackVen0m responds:

Thanks, I'm actually suprised that people are starting to assume that I have a similar style to famous DnB artists. Not entirely sure if thats a good or bad thing seeing as I want to be myself really and not someone else! xD

Anyway, It's still a work in progress so I still got alot of work to do on it. Shouldn't expect everything to be great straight away! :P

[Enya-Tommy Grant]

yep

i like how the piano is eq'd jsut right,
it sounds like a real piano (which it might be, for all i know),
and if it is, kudos to you for making it.
yeah, it's beautifully done,
so no negative marks on my view.
but i'm no professional.

TommyUlysesGrant responds:

Yes it is a real piano :) ...

Thank you ...

[ILTG]

yeah

so i listened to this and what i heard was a little unrefined.
i think if you spent more time EQ'ing and MAKING your instruments and drumloops, then the product will be that much better.
i'm not saying it's bad, i'm saying it's unpolished.

Genshiken responds:

Ok thanks. I'm still Kind of a nub when it comes to Fruity Loops, but I appreciate the criticism and I'll try to polish my songs some more. :)

[Journey To Paradise (EP2 Demo)]

i'm sure

it'll turn out great :D
could you take a look at some of my songs?
you seem lik the kind of person who knows a little about what they're doing, lol.

DigitalPulse responds:

Yeah man, I'll take a look.

Thanks for the review,

Digital Pulse

[Bees R Scary]

jhonen vasquez?

i assume you know who the guy is, lol.
well your songs are weird, but theyre not that bad, really, just needs a bit of fine-tuning.

alienfetus responds:

Doom doom doom.

[Waves of Fire[Dj-S] (Ep#2 Sub)]

darn

thought it was GREAT until the arp popped in.
please choose a different instrument.
please.

Sacrafan responds:

:D All right, all right :p

[Alyse Bass ]D.M.[]

i'm just in a review writing mood

so here goes:
the synth that come in at ~:30 shouldant be so loud, or high-pitched for that mattter.
actually a lot of the leads you use are REALLY loud.
the clap is ok. i like the bass.
but srs. EQ. don;t make the next instrument louder, make the onther instruments softer or tweak the frequencies.
but it shouldn't be too bad once you EQ the fudge out of it and try and use Maximus (if you use Floops)

Darren-M responds:

ok i needed to hear this. alot of it has to do with my mastering of the track, i really boosted the higher bands.

i am wondering if when you say high pitched you are telling me it should drop an octave or are you really meaning to say dull down the high bands?

[We all Fall In Love-Tommy G]

good job!

sounds great, man.
high five to Kevin fro writing it, and
high five to you for playing it!

TommyUlysesGrant responds:

LOL thanks man.

Kevin kern is very skilled and he has made some of my favorate peices.