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killer

good luck with the album n junk.
it's real good,
you shouldn't have much problem gettin it off the ground.
or wherever it started.

it's not smart

to call the NG-goers retards and such,
some who auto 5 will read it and 0 bomb you out of spite.

creative piece, very minimalist, i liked the widened drums, sort of fill up the space.
but if you're gonna make a song dissonant, you really need to hammer in the rhythm or people in general won't like it, although it is still a good piece.

wow, lol

funny how our songs have the same name, and yet such a different feel.
anyhow, very "epic" as the kiddos say.
personally, i think the transition at 2:19 was abrupt.
if it's your program, and yu can't get around it, i suggest skipping the boom and having short (but moty pizzi) strings playing quarters and slowly adding delay or reverb until you can just have them play what you wanted them to play originally.
and i think the attack on the strings is too much imo, shorten it a tad.
but, all opinion.

SSJDre responds:

There are sill a few things I haven't learned how to do with my program, but I'm learning it as I go. I probably could have slid the mix a little to stop that hard transition, but I didn't think about it at the time. But, Unsure and Unattached aren't the same name, though I get what you mean by the words themselves having similar meanings. When I put this track together, I was worried that I made a bad track, but from all of the downloads and the listens as well as the votes, I'm guessing I did a good job, otherwise you probably would have scored me at a 4 or something. Thanks for the review, I'll keep that in mind with my next submission.

you've gotten clubby

so you've become a dj legit, good job, broham!
song is pretty cool, the pizzi part is a little out of it for me, but the writing was
good stuff.

Darren-M responds:

thanks! im glad the structure wasnt too eccentric for you lol, yeah its fun to play my music for others

methinks

it's pretty atmospheric, it gives the mood of the title very well.
if it were to be used in some game,i'd guess that they'd hollow it out and make it sound REALLY distant.
but i like where it is.
good stuff.

BatesyBates responds:

Cheers mate!

hmm

well it's awwright with me.
but it lacks flair, you know?
i dunno, i'm not really into trance and the like,
so what do i know?
still, not bad.

cRAVE01 responds:

thank you : )

hmmmm

well, overall i liked the style of the song.
and the writing was really nice, and instrumentation was great, i really liked those parts.

but here's some things i think would make your song even better (just opinion, but still)
the intro is a little sketchy, sounds like you just put the loops ontop of each other one at a time, put more love into that, not saying you can't pull that off, but you have to do it well.

the drum part from intro to 1st verse sounds really cool, but it doesn't really fit in.

the main reverse pad is too loud, or the backup is too weak.

the drums sound quiet, which is bad because i liked how they sounded, with exception to the hi-hat, i didn't really like how the hi-hat sounded.
perhaps you could find a hat with more sustain.

and all songs sound much better with mastering,
just make sure to roll off bass at ~40kh and cut out unused frequencies in other instruments, gives a professional sound to things.

and remember, this is all opinion, so take it or leave it.

still, i like where this could go.

Enteroar responds:

Wow thanks for the bass tip, I never knew that, I always used my own table of frequencies.
I srsly made this song in like one day so it was pretty rushed, but I felt it had really good flow.
Ill probably work on this song more some other time.
Thanks though!
~Enteroar

the bass

very reminiscent of the tech-pop thing going on with stuff like 3oh3 or kesha.
if i had to give a tip, i'd say work on your drum comp more, because more often than not, drum loops tend to have a loud half and a subtle half.
the hits on the off-beat and snares are on the explicit, then a quieter 16th-note rhythm gives depth to a drum track. and if you master it correctly, it really adds to a song.

Enteroar responds:

I fail at mastering @_@

needs a shaker

makes everything funkier :D
and i liked the whole real instruments/tech drums thing.
and if that wasn't what you were going for,
open up the higher freq's on the instruments, it'll level everything out.

Enteroar responds:

Nope. 100% intented :D

it'd be neat

if that organ had a panning thing going on.
i liked the scratching.
but the instruments were a little MIDI, if that wasn't intended.
everything else was real cool

Enteroar responds:

midi? D: shucks i actually made a lot of these synths T_T

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