i like the personality in this song
the strange instruments sound diffrent than all the generic trances in NG, which i give you kudos for.
but to tell the truth, there's never a point in the song that the listener can call a chorus, it really seems like the same repeated thing with instruments added and taken away sometimes.
but hey, it's a good start, and i like how it's not androgenous with all the other stuff people post on NG's audio board.
keep on truckin'