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i like the personality in this song

the strange instruments sound diffrent than all the generic trances in NG, which i give you kudos for.
but to tell the truth, there's never a point in the song that the listener can call a chorus, it really seems like the same repeated thing with instruments added and taken away sometimes.
but hey, it's a good start, and i like how it's not androgenous with all the other stuff people post on NG's audio board.
keep on truckin'

RugHead responds:

Thanks.
appreciate the review.

really enjoy

live music on NG.
and if it's just a MIDI keyboard or if you used FL to do it, whatever,
it sounds good anyhow (a little noodley, but i like how it sounds anyways)
if this tune was recomposed and expanded, it could be really great,
but 8/10 is good enough :P

xLilRickx responds:

Thanks, I used MIDI for FL, how'd you know? thanks for the response!

take it form xotix

basically THAT, and i have to say, techno/trance iare a really confining genres, so try and make songs under different genres.
and xotix kinda hit this one one the head, so to speak.
- make your own sounds (from presets if you have to)
- less repetititititivity (if your desperate, try and gradually add more drums to create some suspense so the choruses hit harder)
- personality in a song is a must, if it sounds like everything else, it IS everything else. add weird stuff (instruments, ambiance, composure) and make your song stand out for chrissakes.

Raigon50 responds:

The making my own sounds part is what i did. I edited some samples I had and used. The personality part is what gets me however. I wasn't trying to make this sound like anything else. I was just making the song up as I was working on it. If it did sound like something else, it was on accident.

hey

well at least faegoesroar commented, usually you don't get that.
anyways, try another genre, techno is REALLY overdone, and personally, i think it's played out.
as for this song, it's not very good, but at least it's not horrible.
the EQ seems inexistant, so here's a tip:
when youmake your song, put EVERY one of your instruments into a mixer track, then individually EQ them using multiband compresor and prametric EQ and the like, it really helps the sound of your song.
as long as youhave EQ down, everything else kinda falls into place, so practice EQing.

DJ-pierce responds:

haha, thanks, i agree with the overplayed thing. also, i had all the instruments into the mixer and i was kinda afraid to touch it cause i didnt know exactly what it did, lol BUT now i do, thanks. ill give it a go.

the thing about singing

in songs is that NG goers either hate or like it, so it's risky territory.
personally, the tune you sang reminded me of "The Thanksgiving Song" by Adam Sandler, but whatever.
personally, this song isn't enough to gauge your voice on, but i guess i'd say when you hit the high notes, don't clench your throat tight, try and smooth your air and slow it down so you hit the notes without ruining your tone.

lol

you named your song after ahnd sanitizer x]
anyhow, yeah, this sounds more ambient until 1:53, so either cut down the pump, the intro or put it in the "miscellaneous" category, lol.
and the pump is more trancey rather than dancey, excuse my technical speak.
i think the hi-hat-ish sound you put on the offbeats could be flanged or maybe you could alter the pitch so it gives you song a more lifelike feel (as people can't hit a cymbal perfectly over and over) and at the beginning, maybe you should give it (just an idea) reverb and make it 100% wet, then make it louder so that it fills up the track (empy tracks are lackluster and kinda boring) a little better.
but, good writing, and it has a little momentum, so that the main tune sounds like it's important, although you could add some pads or rev cymbals so the chorus hits harder and it really "wow"s the listener.
good day to you sir,
-Slunchy

DavidRx responds:

now this is what i rly need =D
i take notes on everything...thx for the con-crit its helpin me out a lot =D

U DA MAN!!! x]

yet again thx.... :)

Good day to u sire :P

-DrX

lower vocal tracks

yeah, just soften the vocals so it blends with the song and doesn't overpower it.

thirdvii responds:

I didnt even notice that until you said something. I did it in a rush, but thanks for your attention to detail!

i liked it

i just like songs like this wth really distant-sounding tunes.
but yeah, liked the vibe and ambiance,
gratz and all.

kiwiaddict responds:

haha i'm a sucker for those...
thanks for listening!

i think it would sound good

if you added a sub. it would really help pump this bass-driven song.
it sound like you're using a tringular or square lead, so use a deep sine wavesound
to fill in the whole frequency.
not a bad tune, but try writing it with little changes in every measure or so.
that really helps the song sound like it's not repeating.
mostly my opinion, but really add in a sub, it would make your song sound a lot better :D

Acid-Paradox responds:

ok, thanks for the advice !!

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

sounds good to me

really smooth.
kinda basic progression, but it was done well.
that one sound where the igh-pitched noise goes up in pitch(like on 2:19) is kinda overused.

eris

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