kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dayclubbin' (EQing)]

los tips

remember to duck the bass behind the kick yourself so you get the best sound.
lower all of the freq except the high-pitched ones in the shaker, so you get a "sss" sound or a "chka" kind of thing going, and it won't hide behind your music, but be a part of it.
as it turns out, most artists change the values of the parametric eq as the song progresses to push instruments into the background and let others shine..
in my opinion, it's usually for the best to have a pad in your songs, since it fills up silence in the background, giving your songs fuller sound.
i suppose this isn't my most eloquent review, but hopefully every thing will get across ok.

also, don't take everything here as gospel, since music is about changing things up and still having an element people can recognize and enjoy while learning to like the new stuff. henceforth most popular, catchy songs are repetitive.

well, i've probably forgotten some things i wanted to say, but i'll leave this as it is.
good day, sir

Ef-X responds:

thank you very much sir for the review, as soon as I start working on my next tune I'll use these tips.

[Mountain (WIP)]

sweet

you've got a good base structure going!
just use that feel, add some more instruments as the chords progress, and remember to eq everything..
easy as pie

Ef-X responds:

wow hadn't check my songs in a while. Thanks for reviewing and encouraging, i'll eventually make my way back to the song. And yeah easy as pie... *stares at all the tech stuff and gulps*

[Enteroar - Saturation V2]

wootz

i like the chord progression, although it's only 4 measures oho

Enteroar responds:

oho

[Splitters]

neat!

equalizing the voices more would have made it sound better, but that's just me.
but i like the experiment, it's coolio.
and try and read some music theory, it helps with music writing a lot.

[Freezing - Enteroar]

everyone's an expert

here on newgrounds :p

you should try and make a funky bassline for a song, your bass tracks would really work well as funk imho.

the title doesn't really fit, but it's not that important..

the piano is a little cliche, maybe you could snazz it up a little somehow.

i think it'd sound neat if you put a reverb effect over the entire song, and automated it to kick in around :42 (cut it off when you're doing solos & duets).
don't set the effect too high, and make the length inder 1.5 sec, and it'll fill the song up well.
if it doesn't work, then whatevs, because it's not too hard to do..

now that i read the author's comments, i feel sort of like an idiot :p

wellp, keep on truckin' brokaline.

Enteroar responds:

indeed, they are.
mmk thanks :@ i like funkkkk :D
i know it doesnt :/
i know, but i like cheesy trance ):

thanks sir.
~Enteroar

[Enteroar - Ghosts]

i like the the little chord progression

it's very deep...
i would change the clap,
and i like that different pacing!
maybe you could put a reverb on the clap sidechained to the bass or something..
but that's just my opinion..
break's sounding neat..
maybe in the break, you could have a filtered beat that comes in, instead of the instant transition to a kick..
i think it would sound good,
but you don't have to.
and compress the hi-hats to something low, and have the attack a little up, so you get a crisper one.
but that could ruin it, but try for me baby?

overall it's a great and innovative sound as far as my techno knowledge goes.

Enteroar responds:

ooo i like this advice. i can totally hear what youre talking about.
ill try LOL ;D
tyty.

[A Frigost Experience]

hmm

don't worry, i helped a playa out with his scores..

well the song isn't boring,i liked how instruments changed.
but i might suggest focusing on the drum's rhythmic patterns a little more, and putting a compressor and an EQ on every instrument, so you don't have a clogged up sound.

also, there's a lack of high pitched sounds, you don't have to add a ton, just to balance the sound out a little.

still, i liked what was there, and i feel NG needs to step up on the commenting!
it's like they only want to comment on submissions that already have thousands of them!

well, i wish you luck and perseverance, good sir.

RawGreen responds:

wow, alright, well thanks ._.

[Enteroar - Clouds]

neat-o

i like the tune, it sounds like a progression you can really play around with.
well, imo, i like a higher snare,
but still liked the variation in the drum track.
say put a compressor on every track, it helps with mastering a ton!
that's about all it,
have a sweet life, keep making music and getting better!

Enteroar responds:

thank you sir :D

[Till' The Build Up]

neat-o

sweet to see you're making some more songs.
instead of making your lead sound louder, try copying it into another channel and panning one channel hard left and the other hard right,
then turn them down a little to match the song!
and changing the pitch and velocity a teeeny tiny bit on your drum instruments gives a more natural feel (since people don't make the same noise everytime they hit a drum head) and put emphasis on certain beats for more rhythm.
it took me some time to figure those out, i wish someone would have just told me.
as for the song, i like the feel, the chords fit well together.
sounds good, maannnnn

Ef-X responds:

Man...thank you so much for this review, I'll work on it as soon as I can.

[RUN!! (FINAL)]

i like it

it's done well
it has a feel to it, and i like that.
it all depends if that's exactly what yo were going for.
i would add a ghost kick channel for more depth in your drum track.
but that's about it.
enjoy life!