kjhsdgf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[FF | Cruisin' Down Chernobyl]

i guess you cant catch a break from the 0 bombers

this is good stuff.
unless its not yours (i dunno, ive heard some songs get ripped, but i think this id you)
this is very nice.
great EQ and nice rythm.
on the repeptive side, but its 5:45, so whatever.
good work.

freddyfinger responds:

thanks a lot. yeah it's me. is probably my most sampled one but there are a few things i didn't sample on this. i was thinking if this was too long lol but i guess it worked out. and yeah zero bombers will be all over my beats like i'm a bowl of milk or something (wtf lol)

[FF | Breathless]

sounds real

thats what i like to hear.
youve got a knack, my friend.
i think bass couldve beeen a little louder.
i really couldnt hear it that well.

freddyfinger responds:

yeah i was wondering if i should have added some bass to this. i just went in and added some right now, i think it does sound a bit better. thanks a lot :)

[Bowser the Shredder RMX]

well ive never heard the full original

but it sounds like what itd be!
finetune your instruments
and if youre using FLstudio, hook an intrument up to a peak controller and an effect and hook one of the knobs (pick wisely) of the effect (like a filter's cutoff or a flanger's depth) up to the peak or LFO so it reacts to the instrument playing. it will make it sound good and original!

eclipso7 responds:

Thanks for being so consistant in your reviewing! You know a lot about music, I guess. I don't, because I use Garageband.

[E7-Bass Machine]

it sounds like the beginning to something

around 10 sec, i was thinking it would blast out and bee all crazy.
but hey, if you made this, it sounds good for a drum part!

eclipso7 responds:

Haha thanks but I don't know what to say, I didn't want it to be generic.

[1ndian Dreams]

i liked it

sounds good.
you already know what im going to say.
good composure
work on your synths
(the chords were a great choice)
try not to use the original drum synths, use FCP or use effects on the drums/claps/hi-hits/etc.
srs play with the sound generators a bit.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Haha.

Man..

My computer crashed. :(

So I haven't been able to work on a THING! :/

And I'm reviewing this mad late..

But thanks so much for dropping by!

You usually tend to leave helpful reviews. :)

[.:Enigma:.]

a little too crowded for my taste

and the tune seemed repetitive, halfway through the song the melody changes and then only for a few seconds.
this is ok, but it needs to be re-evaluated.

[Hyperactive - Accies]

upgrade your flstudio

nice tune, but if you should not have so much clatter in the song.
when youre choosing instruments instead of looking for presets, go on default ond tweak all of the parameters and come up with something YOU made and that fits EXACTLY to the song.
not too much echo, not too sharp or saw-y.
if you want the music to sound different, make different instruments.
well, its a start.
but the tunes are pretty ok.
could use a little developing.

[Nightshift - Accies]

its good

you just need to to do a little organizing.
i believe it is really a 3/5 because i vote tops on everything.
but the sounds get in the way of each other they need to coalesce and
try not to repeat the same tune for the majority of the song.
but a lot of it was random noise to me, just organize the song to so what you want it to do.
and if you dont know what you want it to do, then start over or break the song down so much (into chords and beats) you can put music and not meaningless noise ontop of the song.
ive been watcing house, i think it might of come off a little house-ish,
sorry for that.

accies responds:

I do agree with you on this, the song does need a bit of work, i never knew 100% what i was going to do exactly with it when the original idea sprung to mind. I'm going to try and work on the song a little bit more, and i'll upload again when i'm satisfied with it. Thanks for your constructive criticism and your generous vote, always appreciated.

[~|Final Fantasy 7|~]

lol did you get tabs

from ultimate-guitar?
lol i helped write them, but theyre only half of the song, sorry :(
well im actually writing an 8-bit version of cloud's theme and itll be out soon enough.
i hope urrbody likes the sad/creepy parts lol :3
and on the song, a little too much echo for my taste, but it works.
and it sounds like you went straight from the tabs, so next time add a little something to make it your own :D

[the 90's]

when you use repetetive lyrics

try not to use them too much, and if so, break it up a little by quickening the cuts and changing pitch so the listener doesn think theyre listening to teh same thing over and over.
and try not to have something repeat fro more than 1/10th of the max time, if the song is more than 30 secs long.
this song was thoroughly weird and i was saying "wat" throughout.
its good at parts, but if you can filter out in your head what is catchy and what is what doesnt need to be in the song, you can produce a gret track.
sometimes ill write a song that couldve been 10 songs, i just lose track a lot.