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gotta hate the 0-bombers

i would know about em, but my music doesnt sound as professional.
ANYWAYS to the review, to me the kick needs a wee bit more bass and probably a little more flare would really bring this song around.
i try desperatly not to make generic trances (yours isnt, but i digress) so my stuff really needs some pro touches.

this song has been on for 2 years

109 votes 1030 listens.
and 2 reviews.
coyishness(cant think of the right word) thy name is newgrounds.

lets have se.....married.

really, youve got some great talent for compostion, although someimes the EQ doesnt sound right for my speakers.

i really enjoy

when submissions are different.
and i enjoyed this.
but could have used more fx and ambien noises to fill space and break repetitivity.
not that his was repetitive musically, but the uhn tiss uhn tiss can get boring.

Murcielago1 responds:

Thanks, man. I am glad you enjoyed this. I agree with you, it gets a little boring and random too. And you're right; my submissions (most of them actually) in some ways are different from others on NG. Thanks once again.

strange song

kept my attention, though.
not exactly catchy or anything special.
but i can see youve got some talent,
i like that this is different than a lot of the other submissions.
its not just UHN TISSS UHN TISS beats and silver/gold/platinum saws shoved down our throats.

too generic for my tastes

needs something to wow me.
but it is a very nice arrangement, although a little repetitive (same chord progression throughout)

DenVessidence responds:

its not the same progression but they are similar. i think part of the repitition is because i have no real breakdown, it goes from one beat to the next without a real break.

i just couldnt get anything to fit well, so i kept it hardcore throughout.

needs a hook

kinda just background music for me (although one of my songs needs ahook, but w/e)
i guess it IS a loop, but most songs need a higher pitched noise to catch attention.

hopeku responds:

It truly is not that good but I don't think that higher pitched noise will change anything haha

nice use of noise

most people (including me and my earlier songs) dont know that you have to put ambient noise to fill blank spots.
but yeah, drums need to be louder if not totally changed.
the main lead is really loud compared, turn it down a smidgen so it doesnt overpower all of the other instruments.
really a 3, bu im votig 5 on everyhting from now on to offset 0-bombers.

Goosebox responds:

Thank mate. I really appreciate the 9.

i think thats pretty weak

that you stole someone's song like that.
if it is your song (i might have misenterpreted your comment)
then the song is pretty o, though a little repetitive
seriously, the onlything that changes is the high pitched lead and harmony.

try to work on

on mastering and find less cheesy-sounding instruments.
well put together, but lacks professionalism.
try using the Maximus plugin before exporting, for instance.

eris

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